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    dots Submission Name: After The Raindots

    Author: webdevil
    Elite Ratio:    3.2 - 113/105/43
    Words: 33
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsAfter The Raindots

    The rain has water'd the earth
    a soft chill is on the wind
    and the night is cold
    longing for the warmth
    that pants with desire
    yet the night is still
    and lonely.

    Submitted on 2008-03-31 08:53:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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