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    dots Submission Name: loneliness and broken heartsdots
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    Author: sugar_sweet
    ASL Info:    20/ Female/ Canada
    Elite Ratio:    1.84 - 11/8/15
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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       This is kinda what im going through right now


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    dotsloneliness and broken heartsdots
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    loneliness consuming me
    forcing itself into my every thought
    draining me of every tear
    too many times have I done this
    waiting for you
    whom I love so dear
    night after night I wait
    and night after night I cry once again

    when you are here you tell me of your love for me
    you tell me that you hold me so dear
    then one day you are gone
    and I am left to cry once more
    only with memories of happier times

    I am tired of waiting
    I am tired of crying
    and I think it may be time
    to break your heart as mine is breaking
    and stop waiting





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