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    dots Submission Name: Triumph of the Coal Bluff Bruisersdots
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    Author: Sheakhan
    ASL Info:    20/M/FL
    Elite Ratio:    5.63 - 149/153/66
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Prose/Misc
    Total Views: 158
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 663



    Description:
       Devil, devil take a number
    listen to the song.

    If it stops before he's under,
    dig him up, and let him 'lone.

    A title poorly chosen.



    Musical graves are stupendous, but let us not forget the core.

    Cheat death and live.

    You are still a cheater.


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    dotsTriumph of the Coal Bluff Bruisersdots
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    Why clamber for revolution?

    Choose to be the reticent one for a change.

    Elaborate?

    Too established to waste this breath on you.

    Collaborate and coalesce, we are temporary, thinnies, turbulent.

    Make a mark to stand testament forever to your greatness.

    You are foolish to feel accomplished for this,
    even the rocks will die as you do.

    We burn like lightning, short and sweet and loud and triumphant.

    Coordinate an attack on history.

    We will hide in trenches until it all passes.

    Whispering secrets and hopes.




    Submitted on 2008-03-31 11:44:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Oh, I like it it represnts how short life actually is, to me anyway,

    Sorry we got off on the wrong foot.

    ~Carrie
    | Posted on 2008-05-26 00:00:00 | by dismal_s child | [ Reply to This ]


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