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    dots Submission Name: Forget youdots
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    Author: Xena
    ASL Info:    17/F/Pluto
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 24/20/22
    Words: 357
    Class/Type: Lyrics/
    Total Views: 758
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2138



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       A song I wrote all by my self


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    dotsForget youdots
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    I'm laying awake at night
    just watching the time past by
    I'm to afraid to fall asleep
    Cause I see you in my dreams
    (spoken) Dreams? More like nightmares


    Chorus
    There is only one thing on my mind
    It's there every second of every minute
    I just want it to go away
    But you won't go, oh no you just won't
    You refuse to leave me alone


    Everything I say and do just keeps reminding me of you
    This infatuation has turned into my very own disease
    As much as I want to hate you, I just can't help but love you baby
    I've wanted so much to kiss you, but she already has
    I'd really don't care what they say, cause I'm in love with you

    Chorus
    There is only one thing on my mind
    It's there every hour of every day
    I just want it to go away
    But you won't go, oh no you just won't
    You refuse to leave me the hell alone


    I've begged the heavens every night to rip you from my heart
    To strip you from my mind, to pick you from my bones,
    to burn you from my soul, but once your gone,
    It leaves me feeling dead, and I can't take that feeling,
    I can't even tell which is worse to bare


    Chorus
    There is only one thing on my mind
    It's there every month of the year
    I just want it to go away
    But you won't go, oh no you just won't
    You refuse to leave me all alone


    I really need to forget you
    Shouldn't I try to forget you?
    and all those worthless memories, the lies, and the betrayal
    But all I can remember are those perfect hazel eyes,
    the softness of your hands, and the warmth of your body

    I lay awake at night
    just watching the time past me by
    just trying to forget you
    just wanting to forget you
    just begging to forget you
    But only ever loving you




    Submitted on 2008-03-31 12:33:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Well........if the music is as good as the words, then it will be a hit with me.

    Very well written.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2008-04-04 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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