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    Author: Savannah Cullen
    Elite Ratio:    1.66 - 9/37/48
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Walking through the forest
    As the darkness grows
    Not once stopping for rest
    The icy wind continues to blow
    Snow spiraling toward the ground
    Thunder rolling off the clouds
    Lightning flashing in the sky
    Mystery becons the walker
    Towards the large cave
    Centered in a meadow
    Quickly checking it was empty
    It lumbers inside
    Closing it's eyes
    And drifting to sleep
    Until next spring
    Finally stopping for rest
    Deep in slumber
    Hibernation




    Submitted on 2008-04-01 18:53:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Neat and nifty staccotto lines here... very nicely drawn to the end... loved it... bravo... bravo... bravo...
    | Posted on 2008-04-02 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]


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