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    dots Submission Name: To all the nights...dots

    Author: inkpen
    ASL Info:    19
    Elite Ratio:    4.12 - 391/199/61
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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       Yea, well I was bored and felt like writing something. If you must know this was inspired by my sister for some reason, and right now I hear walker texas ranger.
    Chuck Norris' tears cure cancer. Too bad Chuck norris never cries. Ever.
    And if you don't really get the piece- its basically just a salute to anyone who's not a ah..ahem.
    The second to-for is for the people who say I love you and mean it.
    The fourth to-for is for the souls who will always have spirit, and the ones who are just born..or something.
    (if you didnt get that..but you people are smart so you probably did.)

    **name..I've changed the name like three times...and I'll probably change it at least twice more.hah

    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsTo all the nights...dots

    To all the nights you've came together
    For the ones who've helped each other
    To all the hearts that have been broken
    For the ones who've meant what's spoken
    To all the smiles that have been cracked
    For the ones who've never looked back
    To all the souls that have stayed young
    For the ones who've only just begun
    To all the tears that have been cried
    For the ones who've never lied
    I salute you,
    and your very being
    For behind every night, heart, smile, soul and tear
    There is a meaning...

    Submitted on 2008-04-02 18:09:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
    I love this.
    Simple, but elegant.
    It seems familiar...but I know I haven't seen anything like this before...
    Keep it up!
    | Posted on 2008-06-09 00:00:00 | by Kat Tudor | [ Reply to This ]
      This is truly amazing. It completely took my breath away. I love it. It's just deep somehow and it reminds me of a lot that occurs in life. Your poems are absolutely amazing.
    Love you, buggy. <3

    | Posted on 2008-04-02 00:00:00 | by leadpencil | [ Reply to This ]

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