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    dots Submission Name: it's all too fastdots
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    Author: Alexandra
    ASL Info:    19/f/SC
    Elite Ratio:    1.89 - 54/76/57
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 172
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 624



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    Bad habits kill: but so do people,
    Smoke in your lungs, Death with a sickle.
    Cars gliding by; day at an end…
    Cash pouring down, but no money to spend.
    Make the right choices, avoid the mistakes,
    Life marches forward raising the stakes.
    Right and wrong are so distorted
    People dying, homes deserted
    who can prove that Something's there,
    rain falling down clears the air.
    We're all on a leash, all in a cage
    Limited minds blinded by rage.
    The sun comes up no matter where you are,
    The Hope shines down, smile in awe




    Submitted on 2008-04-03 18:02:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Highly original and very creative. Very well put together and expertly executed.

    Very well done.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2008-04-04 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]



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