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    dots Submission Name: My soul mate dieddots
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    Author: lolavie
    ASL Info:    23/female/Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 70/175/103
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Misc/Romance
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    dotsMy soul mate dieddots
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    A soldier dying in the war
    A baby died right before I was born
    He died you see
    Buried under 6 ft deep

    He was on life support
    he was suppose to be my love
    and I prayed that
    he'd hang on, free of
    the pain of possibly losing my love

    My soulmate past away
    before I even saw face
    never felt him standing here
    but every night he cleared my fears
    and I loved him
    Didnt see him
    I knew him
    before I knew him

    my soulmate died

    ....






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