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    dots Submission Name: I heard your voice tonightdots
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    Author: lolavie
    ASL Info:    23/female/Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 70/175/103
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Rant/Misc
    Total Views: 780
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    dotsI heard your voice tonightdots
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    show your feelings
    control your pain
    your eyes cry

    Tell me your name
    You know I know
    what's your name

    I know you're hurt
    Show your feelings
    Just be strong

    Tell me your name
    no, not that one
    the other

    See my feelings
    take my pain
    my eyes cry

    You know my name?
    No, not that one
    my other

    you see me in you
    I see you in vain
    our eyes cry


    ...though it is only me looking in the mirror




    Submitted on 2008-04-03 19:29:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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