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    dots Submission Name: Hate Is A Strong Worddots
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    Author: SonOfDamascus
    ASL Info:    18/m/Maine
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 27/35/37
    Words: 116
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 925
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 812



    Description:
       I Came Up With This.
    As A Way Of Saying
    "I'm Sorry"
    To My Best Friend.


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    dotsHate Is A Strong Worddots
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    I Don't Know What To Call It.
    But It Isn't Love.

    There Is A Lingering Sensation.
    Like Something Is Still There.

    Mistakes Will Be Made.
    And Should Be Forgiven.

    A Blind Man Never Sees,
    The People He May Hurt.

    Love Blinds You,
    For Life.

    I Deal With Enough Regret.
    But I Just Make It Worse.

    So I Write Another Line.
    Say Another Verse.

    Don't Make Any Moves,
    That You'll Later Regret.

    Ghosts That Haunt From The Past.
    Are There To Make Sure You Never Forget.

    The Mistakes That You Make.
    Make You In The End.

    So Ask For Forgiveness,
    And Hope You Keep Your Friends.




    Submitted on 2008-04-03 20:01:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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