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    dots Submission Name: Goldendots
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    Author: sweetme16
    ASL Info:    18/f/who cares
    Elite Ratio:    2.21 - 108/251/162
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 186
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 549



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    dotsGoldendots
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    Walking away I think of what once was
    We were once known at the golden couple
    Now all that’s left of the golden couple is a broken gold heart
    I remember you once saying that I was the only one is your life
    Now I can’t believe that I believed that golden lie
    All the while I sat and waited at those “forgotten" dates
    You were out having the time of you life with a golden date
    Wiping the tears off my face
    I head in the direction of my brand new
    Golden Day






    Submitted on 2008-04-03 22:50:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      just as a butterfly flies in the sky a new golden day is born another lover will come and another golden date will be born
    tomorow is another day dont frown
    be glad you found out today that the golden date wants to be free as the butterfly

    good write sandman
    | Posted on 2008-04-04 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]



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