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    dots Submission Name: Bringing The Distant Neardots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       Spontaneous Friday piece
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    dotsBringing The Distant Neardots

    The light used to seem as though
    "IT" was at the end
    of the tunnel
    Awaking one day
    to find <@> was
    the funnel
    Bringing The Distant Near

    Releasing all sorrow & fear

    Embracing the light
    Beaming, Streaming Love
    Bringing The Distant Near

    And All is a mirror

    Bringing The Distant Near

    Submitted on 2008-04-04 10:23:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Repitition on this one was lovely. It conjured up the image of staring into the pool of life and seeing only your own reflection.
    Very good.
    | Posted on 2008-11-01 00:00:00 | by Shadowstar13 | [ Reply to This ]
      These awakenings propel us forward into and onto new horizons.... where mostly we find we were standing all the time........ excellent Tiff !
    | Posted on 2008-10-16 00:00:00 | by col13x | [ Reply to This ]
      You embraced the light in this sunny poem! Lots of depth and plenty of food for thought make me ready eager to "bring the distant near." Sharon
    | Posted on 2008-04-12 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]
      I see the light, reflected|detcelfer in your eyes, tiff.

    Your poems are always a rainbow, your thoughts filled with love and the stars. And the light grows ever closer with each word.

    Blinding light pouring into me. I am light. You are light. The world has become light.

    "A daystar rising in our hearts".


    | Posted on 2008-04-07 00:00:00 | by AsiaticFox | [ Reply to This ]
      I love this one Tiff, so many times we forget how light is all around us. Even the struggle to find it is an act of love.

    In the Hermetic writings it tells how human beings can wish themselves anywhere. And that those who are near us feel can our presence.

    Everything that God has is being given to us.

    Beautiful work, thanks for the inspiration.

    lots of love,

    | Posted on 2008-04-06 00:00:00 | by nansofast | [ Reply to This ]
      this is really interesting! the title is very clever as well!! i kept thinking of mirrors and reflections the whole time reading this, thus...

    "And All is a mirror
    Bringing The Distant Near"

    an awakening image you presented with this!! was easy to understand and the mesage very clear, cuz it made sense :) again, i like those two lines, very profound to me, thnx for sharing!!!!

    | Posted on 2008-04-04 00:00:00 | by scissorhands | [ Reply to This ]

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