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A rose is not a thing— But a considerate symbol; It is not cantankerous. Nor mellow. A rose is composed of a system— Molded with the emotion That falls safely from the eyes And fill the heart. |
To be honest I read this a while ago and was like "wah?" But now I get it. lol. I like your concept of taking the rose as a symbol for emotion. I had a problem with you using "mellow." I don't know why, but the word just sticks out like a sore thumb. Maybe use an adjective of it. Carefree? Complaisant? | Posted on 2008-04-14 00:00:00 | by lovedeathsdeath | [ Reply to This ] | |