Sign up to EliteSkills




Already have an account? Login to Roleplay.Cloud
Forgot password? Recover Password

Manipulated


Author: iHaveNoName323
ASL Info:    23/M/NC
Elite Ratio:    5.6 - 37 /37 /26
Words: 192
Class/Type: Lyrics /Satire
Total Views: 1018
Average Vote:    No vote yet.
Bytes: 1213



Description:




Manipulated



Judge unto me and you shall see
sin for what it truly means
a measure of control, for our weak hearts
in light of impending doom
playing upon our fears of damnation
we give up freedom in hopes of salvation


Manipulated, wretched little thing
you can’t always believe in what you read
allow your mind to float free
and you will see
the truth for what it really is


We are what we are
and we do as we please
without a moment of regret,
ritual sacrifices of
maiming and killing with smiles
in the name of our just gods


Manipulated, wretched little thing
you can’t always believe in what you read
allow your mind to float free
and you will see
the truth for what it really is


Burning rapture of truth behold
open your eyes and see
the truth for what it really is
you kill for a merciful god
and judge those who are the same

You are a virus
an incurable waist

You see the truth and yet you lie
in ignorance you will confide




Submitted on 2008-04-04 21:18:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
Edit post

Rate This Submission

1: >_<
2: I dunno...
3: meh!
4: Pretty cool
5: Wow!




Comments



Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

1. Be honest.
2. Try not to give only compliments.
3. How did it make you feel?
4. Why did it make you feel that way?
5. Which parts?
6. What distracted from the piece?
7. What was unclear?
8. What does it remind you of?
9. How could it be improved?
10. What would you have done differently?
11. What was your interpretation of it?
12. Does it feel original?



159871