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    dots Submission Name: Tomorrow Always Comesdots
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    Author: Silencer
    ASL Info:    25/m/AL
    Elite Ratio:    3.91 - 52/66/29
    Words: 194
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsTomorrow Always Comesdots
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    These aren't the best years of my life.
    And I'm not eager to be old enough to buy beer.
    I usually assume that I'm wrong and Dad is right.
    I don't look to the future and feel nothing but fear.

    What's wrong with today or tomorrow?
    What's wrong with at the end of this week?
    Why should I look back at the dead and feel sorrow?
    Do I really need to live right now like I'm at my peak?

    I'm not in a hurry to get things done.
    I just love every day like I will love the last.
    I've never felt the need to rush and run.
    Yes I learn from the past and I do care what might happen, but I'm not living my life that damn fast.

    So tonight I will kneel at my bed and thank God for this day.
    I will then remember the dead and say I will see them in due time.
    But, soon enough I will run out of things to say.
    Then I will rest easy knowing that if the Lord takes me in my sleep I will be just fine.




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      wow your i like this but i have to say i'm different in the sence i'm rush i'm excited can't wait to graduate college and be the person i've always meant to be. i don't pray although i prob should.. your post is deep and its longer than the last i like that. keep writting

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    | Posted on 2011-01-31 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]


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