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    dots Submission Name: Army of Heartsdots
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    Author: SanctityExposed
    ASL Info:    25
    Elite Ratio:    3.98 - 48/66/40
    Words: 320
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsArmy of Heartsdots
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    You know that feeling, when you get lost in a song?
    Where everything you felt just moments before, is just gone...and there's this light that invades your soul?
    Make it last forever.
    Holding onto patience wearing thin.
    There's just something revealing and all together concealing about the mental state...the mental state of a girl free.
    C'mon, step my way so I have something to do.
    I'm ready to fight, ready to have my own reverie.
    Ready to duel.
    Draw your sword, my fair game.
    Wield it strong, vicariously, for your girth will be slain.
    Keep feet in motion, ever stepping, never resting.
    Down, sword, down.
    I'm the girl forlorn, confident, reclusive, devastated.
    I'm the girl who's ready for a challenge.
    Though, I'm still the girl who yearns and leans.
    Delicately pluck the strings of mine heart, o' love.
    Tender music writhe from your own fingertips alone.
    Sing from me my heart.
    Sing of your enduring love, pursuing love, demurring love.
    I love to dream, to cascade my thoughts around future purpose. I find it hard to stay within realms of reality while on my ship of fantasy. I nestle and burrow myself in the pillows of want, smiling all the while at things I could easily achieve.
    Cast on the sea of brilliant jade
    My boat rocks back and forth.
    "O'er and abroad lies our destiny!"
    I cry, land oh land!
    My hand, without eyes to look,
    reaches for the passion placed behind me.
    A single movement, clutched, safe.
    "My sweetest love, darling, angelic song..." he coos.
    The sun wasn't the brightest thing my orbs could see.
    It was the velvety radiant streams of love at my chest.
    Life is just amorous, exploding with opportunities, and I'm beckoning it's tender tendrils.
    Oh come to me, please.
    Wrap me up in your arms so dear, and take me on a journey.
    You've got the map, I've got the drive.




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