Wonderland Reality

Author: DiamondTears ASL Info:    20/F/Wa Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 66 /109 /57 Words: 91

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Wonderland Reality

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Alice has fallen down again Breaking limb, Acid swirls delicately Through her spindly circuit of veins Rabbits red eye, Twitched like the ticking of seconds. Bombs breaking earth above. Cant seem to hear their devastation Preoccupation of dinner parties, And falling stars… Rather dwindle in the sapphire sparkle Of a maddened mind. Forget the practicality Make room for the pleasant nonsense To block out the darkness Your clandestine of realities, Locked in a box. While dreams run array through the twilight, Reality knocks, and knocks, eternally in the box.

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