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    dots Submission Name: Calamity Does not Live Heredots
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    Author: Sheakhan
    ASL Info:    20/M/FL
    Elite Ratio:    5.61 - 148/153/66
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 80
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 624



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       calamity does not live here.

    edited whatever day it is today, as per saartha's kind pointing outing.


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    dotsCalamity Does not Live Heredots
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    Theres a taste on the pillow,
    that reminds me of you.
    I forget that you're there while I sleep.
    I always wake up with a heavy heart beat,
    fearful you have carried on.

    I don't want to awake
    to a world cloaked in a gloom,
    a world full of everything else except you.

    I don't want to awake
    to any other,
    any other,
    other than you.

    But when I turn over you're there,
    deeply dead in a sleep.

    My arms refresh their memory
    by locking 'round your warmth.





    Submitted on 2008-04-05 09:27:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      
    "My arms refresh their memory
    by locking 'round your warmth."

    well put. i enjoyed the whole poem, but this stands out.
    | Posted on 2008-04-23 00:00:00 | by blackbird | [ Reply to This ]
      A refreshing change to the run-of-the-mill 'you left me' and 'I love you' poems alike. This shows the real paranoia some people feel about their relationships.
    A few semi-dull descriptions that pull the poem down ('world full of gloom' in particular felt boring to me), but overall a very decent poem. Nice work!
    | Posted on 2008-04-06 00:00:00 | by saartha | [ Reply to This ]


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