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    dots Submission Name: Worth of itdots

    Author: Ceyx
    Elite Ratio:    5.69 - 111/107/81
    Words: 169
    Class/Type: Poetry/The pain inside
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    Average Vote:    2.5000
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    dotsWorth of itdots

    It's just so frustrating-
                   I want to scream until aneurysm!
    I wonder if it will hurt as bad as this?

    (You make the blood vessels -pop-)

    I despise all that I am because-
                   I am just what she made me.

    What I used to want
    -now, I no longer need
    I'm left with what I never wanted
    -or needed
    and I can't seem to escape it
    So, what is there left to do?
       -To say?

    What is left for one that has not been fully destroyed?
    It's like already knowing what happens at the end of a movie...

    -Why even bother to watch it???

    (unless there's female frontal nudity)

    Screaming in my head
       'til impulses burst
    and the nerves are on fire
       in the back of my throat
    She brought out the worst of me
    I'll bring out the
    worst in


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       kiss me before the sky goes dark, we all flirt with the tiniest notion

    you always have the most brilliant endings tho i'm sure that i've heard you're before.

    i like this one. tho i winced at the (-pop-)

    much love
    | Posted on 2008-05-28 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, I really like this poem. You are a really good poet. I think my favorite part of this poem was:
    "What is left for one that has not been destroyed?
    It's like already knowing what happens at the end of a movie...

    -Why even bother to watch it???

    (unless there's female frontal nudity)"
    You're hilarious lol. But, you do write lovely poetry. I'm glad I put you on my stalk list.
    | Posted on 2008-04-05 00:00:00 | by bubble_popper15 | [ Reply to This ]

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