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    dots Submission Name: Svanidzedots
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    Author: Senna27NZ
    ASL Info:    33/m/New Zealand-UK
    Elite Ratio:    5.42 - 251/184/26
    Words: 153
    Class/Type: Lyrics/
    Total Views: 1275
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 930



    Description:
       Stalin's first wife Ekaterina died after they'd been married just 3 years.

    At her funeral, he said "This creature softened my heart of stone. She died and with her died my last warm feelings for humanity."

    How Russia's history might have differed had she lived...


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    I'll tear out the pages from Psalms to Galatians
    I'll not leave a chapter behind!
    Dear 'katerina, ignored by St. Rita
    I'll curse all the Saints til I die!

    What poetry can raise my loved one from her bed?
    What words of thee can bring her back to life again?

    Goodbye to salvation and her restoration
    I'm turning my back on The Light
    Send my possessions as smoke to the heavens
    May the soot soil His gates for all time

    What poetry can raise my loved one from her bed?
    What poetry will see her by my side again?

    I'll write of our joy by the lake and the tears in your wake
    I'll write of the folly of faith and of sadness that aches
    I'll write of the years I will spend growing bitter and old
    Oh love, how the world now feels so cold!






    Submitted on 2008-04-06 18:17:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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