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    dots Submission Name: True Happinessdots
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    Author: smartblond
    ASL Info:    18/F/IL
    Elite Ratio:    3.91 - 97/114/33
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 475
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    Description:
       When i was real young I didn't realize how fortunate I was until I got diagnosed with Myasthenia Gravis (a muscular disease) and I was weak and ended up missing 3/4 of my 8th grade year. i spent all day in bed because I couldn't sit up or stad up for more then a few minutes. I hardly ever went downstairs and spent a while in the hospital. After high doses of Prednisone and Mestinon not to mention to plasma fusions and surgery I went back and graduated top of my class from 8th grade. I realize now how BLESSED I am and that even when I was extremely ill i was still better off then a lot of people. WHEN YOU READ THIS I HOPEYOU REALIZE NO MATTER HOW BAD OFF YOU THINK YOU ARE . OTHERS ARE A LOT WORSE OFF. HECK YOU HAVE A COMPUTER OR AT LEAST A WAY TO GET ACCESS SO YOU SHOULDN'T BE COMPLAINING.

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    dotsTrue Happinessdots
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    I know that I am fortunate
    I have a family that I love
    I have safety and security
    And help from up above

    I have never found a reason
    For which I should wear a frown
    Life is just too short
    To let things get you down

    We just need to remember
    How lucky we all are
    We have things others dream about
    Or wish for upon stars

    So any time youíre angry
    Just think of all in need
    And find out what you can do
    To help them in their plead

    Cause when youíre helping others
    Youíre helping yourself too
    For with every contribution
    Happiness is brought to you




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      i'm not sure i would give any critical comments on this, i think from your description...you are blessed and you realize it...which is so important!!!!! i think this is a good reminder to those ungrateful people that complain all the time about everything for no reason just because they are angry and take it out on everyone else. i admire your determination and your willingness to share something very personal. "faith without works is dead', and you've done a good thing here!!!!
    | Posted on 2008-04-07 00:00:00 | by scissorhands | [ Reply to This ]
      You show great courage, strength and compassion and I'm happy you shared this piece that reminds us of the truly important things. I am sorry for your suffering but eveyrthing that happens to us along our journey is a strengthening and growth opportunity and I'm very proud of you for keepin on! Attitude is everything!

    This was a nice piece for a Monday!
    Great!

    love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share
    tif ~*~
    | Posted on 2008-04-07 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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