you own me

Author: Squall Leon Hea Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 104 /79 /29 Words: 105

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you own me

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Didn't know this before That my life would get this Sour At your absence even more Pain Deep down into my core I just now have understood You own my heart than any would It's wierd how I fell for you Right now , being with you is what to do Smile , smile and be happy love For nothing is as magical as you lil dove I say magical , because you bespelled me Placed under a charm of Thy With me , oh please , with me Dear love , Dear Dear love , be

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aww its so sweet

| Posted on 2008-04-17 00:00:00 | by Druecilla | [ Reply to This ]

Truley beautiful hun..... I loved it :) Thanks and mucho huggles Safire

| Posted on 2008-04-07 00:00:00 | by girly101 | [ Reply to This ]

That was beautiful.

| Posted on 2008-04-07 00:00:00 | by Mena_Broken_Ang | [ Reply to This ]

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