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    dots Submission Name: you own medots
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    Author: Squall Leon Hea
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 104/79/29
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 1011
    Average Vote:    4.5000
    Bytes: 596



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       for a special somene , hope you like it..


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    dotsyou own medots
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    Didn't know this before
    That my life would get this Sour

    At your absence even more
    Pain Deep down into my core

    I just now have understood
    You own my heart than any would

    It's wierd how I fell for you
    Right now , being with you is what to do

    Smile , smile and be happy love
    For nothing is as magical as you lil dove

    I say magical , because you bespelled me
    Placed under a charm of Thy

    With me , oh please , with me
    Dear love , Dear Dear love , be




    Submitted on 2008-04-07 02:36:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      aww its so sweet
    | Posted on 2008-04-17 00:00:00 | by Druecilla | [ Reply to This ]
      Truley beautiful hun.....
    I loved it :)

    Thanks and mucho huggles
    Safire
    | Posted on 2008-04-07 00:00:00 | by girly101 | [ Reply to This ]
      That was beautiful.
    | Posted on 2008-04-07 00:00:00 | by Mena_Broken_Ang | [ Reply to This ]


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