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    dots Submission Name: Let "IT" Flowdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 66
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
    Total Views: 534
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 501



    Description:
       Just a fun way to start Monday - dance and sing & be happy to be alive! The day is our song!
    Love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsLet "IT" Flowdots
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    Pump up the volume
    old school punk,
    alternative,
    rock & roll!

    Through my head back,
    uplift arms,
    shakin booty,
    Let "IT" flow!!

    Becoming Each Note
    Look at me Float ~ ~ ~

    On with the beat
    tappin my feet

    Singing out loud
    old school rhythm
    upbeat rhyme!

    Happy to be alive
    drifting in and out
    of time!







    Submitted on 2008-04-07 10:55:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Among the pleasures of life are those favorite tunes and songs that just make us dance both literally and figuratively speaking. I really enjoyed this happy look at life. :-) Sharon
    | Posted on 2008-04-12 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]
      hey hi yhanx fir the hi i liked this last post of yors a little nostagia of music
    hope all is well and was reading yor journal on yor new business good luk and yor right hard work does pay off

    sandman
    | Posted on 2008-04-09 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      I like Mondays and I like the feel of dancing to upbeat music and letting 'things' go... so, I liked this write. It's upbeat and fun.

    As old school(?) rock and rollers Lynard Skynard would say, "Turn IT up!!"

    :)
    | Posted on 2008-04-09 00:00:00 | by Intricate1 | [ Reply to This ]
      This is like Vanilla Ice meats hippy. lol.

    You sure are into the groove, aren't you tiff? "I wanna rock and roll all night...and party every day!" --> tiff's motto

    Interesting. You're interesting when you rap.

    ~AsiaticFox
    | Posted on 2008-04-07 00:00:00 | by AsiaticFox | [ Reply to This ]
      haha this was fun!! your excitement comes thru in every word, good for you
    | Posted on 2008-04-07 00:00:00 | by scissorhands | [ Reply to This ]


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