Sa-fe Fire

Author: Squall Leon Hea Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 104 /79 /29 Words: 102

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Sa-fe Fire

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To appreciate , I did not before Til I lost , and life turned sour But now I appreciate that I got a chance And to that cahnce my heart shall dance A name of a Gem A heart never goes dim A soul of fire But a Sa-fe fire that goes dire What does love hold now? I want to be better , but how? I want to please her-~sigh~ Going to be hard , but glad to try I guess that is what love is all about And hopefully it shall fully sprout

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but hom? I think its "but how?" ? And she probably loves you more than you no hun :) -Safire

| Posted on 2008-04-08 00:00:00 | by girly101 | [ Reply to This ]

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