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    dots Submission Name: Let godots
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    Author: arodase
    Elite Ratio:    4.36 - 17/19/20
    Words: 52
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 132
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       ~A kinda feeling~ A kinda state of mind at the moment.


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    dotsLet godots
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    Spirits of possessions,
    Mountains of longing,
    Release me
    Holding on to the violin strings of your heart
    I won't let go
    Leaning, falling away
    Down the abyss
    Waking to you
    Telling me you won't leave me
    Fear, Reluctance, bleeding hands
    finally open.

    To see what future has in store for us.




    Submitted on 2008-04-08 11:09:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      ah, the violin strings of the heart! Nice poetic image there... play those strings for all their worth... nifty poem bravo... bravo... bravo ....
    | Posted on 2008-04-10 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]



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