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    dots Submission Name: Willinglydots
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    Author: Kaygrl
    ASL Info:    19/female/Washington
    Elite Ratio:    2.31 - 153/196/213
    Words: 160
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 147
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 963



    Description:
       just random thoughts that have popped into my head...


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    dotsWillinglydots
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    With every breath each day,
    Every moment I delay,
    Kills me inside for you not to know,
    How you make me feel,

    I feel beautiful,
    Like nothing can bring me down,
    I feel so much,
    It seems my heart may burst,

    Do you understand,
    How much it is I love you,
    Your sweet kiss,
    Your strong hands,
    You’re everything to me,

    My whole world,
    Brightens as I see you,
    It dims when I don’t,
    I love having you around,
    Just to talk to,
    The pressures of the world melt away,

    My knees still get weak,
    My heart still pounds,
    The excitement still there forever,

    I love what you do to me,
    I love how I feel,
    And where we’re at,
    It’s all good,
    You’re my heart,
    Tucked tightly away,
    Only you steal it,
    Only you can have it.




    Submitted on 2008-04-08 12:42:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Gah it got my heart pounding. Intensive passionn~ it gives me that feeling. Protected, loved, optimistic. Something I can actually dedicate to my boyfriendd~~~!!!! (If I wrote it, that is!) ;
    | Posted on 2008-04-09 00:00:00 | by arodase | [ Reply to This ]


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