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    dots Submission Name: Aurora Borealisdots
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    Author: Cirruculum
    ASL Info:    17/Male/SW Kansas
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 36/35/17
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
    Total Views: 67
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 691



    Description:
       I saw some really beautiful pictures, and came up with this.

    As always, the correct punctuation evades me...I should work on my punctuation :)

    Enjoy!

    Have a good day,
    Cirruculum (TK)


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    dotsAurora Borealisdots
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    Aurora Borealis is a spectacle to marvel.
    In itself, it's the making of drama.
    To me, it's the royalty of the Northern lights.
    To the naked eye, a sheer menagerie
    The colors a powerful illumination.
    As you're visually pulled in you'll witness different treasures.
    These treasures are nothing more than gifts so fine.
    For these heavenly lights are beyond the unique mode.
    Those include an ever-changing puzzle
    A puzzle so physical; the arcs, rays, and the bands.
    The trickery of light never'll be tarnished.
    Aurora Borealis is definitely a reflection from God!
    A true maze to behold!




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    ||| Comments |||
      Very interesting write. Watched a couple documentaries on these lights a few weeks ago on the History Channel or one of those type of channels. Found it interesting how they are a wonderful sight yet they are born from the angry flares of the sun. Too much of a chameleon those lights seem to be. I think the more science learns about them the more they will realize they arent a good thing, ya know?

    Your punctuation was good. I wouldnt fret over that.

    Thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2008-04-10 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]


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