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    dots Submission Name: Sedated U.S.A.dots
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    Author: MartiniMadeLvr
    ASL Info:    19/f/@death's door
    Elite Ratio:    3.44 - 94/121/46
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 83
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    dotsSedated U.S.A.dots
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    pills piled high

    take you to the sky

    bring you a smile

    while life passes you by

    little, big

    white, blue

    these pills

    will show you

    show you the new

    synthetic voodoo

    that keeps the U-S-of-A

    sedated

    psych's and pills

    overated

    contaminated

    by society

    poison spilled

    prescriptions filled

    for an illness

    that doesnt exist

    except for in our heads

    from where we feel numb

    the passion dead

    but take a pill

    and youre alright.




    Submitted on 2008-04-08 21:11:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This poem could hit home with so many people. In my town, I know at least five people who do drugs on a regular basis. And yet, they feel horrible after. The effect on America with these drugs is phenomenal, and you were able to put all these thoughts into words.
    My favorite part was:
    "psych's and pills
    overated
    contaminated
    by society
    poison spilled
    prescriptions filled
    for an illness
    that doesnt exist"

    Kudos on a great poem that captures the true essence of the meaning of pills. =]
    | Posted on 2008-04-09 00:00:00 | by darkwinged | [ Reply to This ]
      I really connected to this piece - 1 - I've been prescribed "manic & psychotic drugs" before & I totally react the opposite so I smoke the green and am very functional. 2 - because several of my friends have become addicted to Vicodin and have either died or are not doing well.
    Prayers to all
    love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share
    tif ~*~
    | Posted on 2008-04-09 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]



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