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    dots Submission Name: For The Red White and Bluedots
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    Author: Diablo Tapitio
    ASL Info:    30
    Elite Ratio:    3.08 - 85/111/62
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Poetry/Political
    Total Views: 868
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    Bytes: 749



    Description:
       Anti War, Anti Profiteer


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    dotsFor The Red White and Bluedots
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    I can see it coming,
    I can see it clear,
    another nation bombed,
    can you feel the end creep near?

    I can hear the marching,
    can you hear it too?
    I hear the wardrums pounding,
    more blood for the red white and blue.

    I can feel the torment,
    the fear and the pain,
    as the president justifies,
    our young soldiers die in vaine.

    I can smell the bodies,
    this is sad but true,
    just becouse they are not american,
    dosent mean they dont count too.

    I am sick of all the fighting,
    look at what we have already been through,
    we dont need another sacrifice,
    For the red White and blue.





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    ||| Comments |||
      I agree very real shows real passion that you feel for our nation. very good thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2010-04-07 00:00:00 | by Stargazer89 | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked this one because it is very real and very prevelant-not just now, but always. I also liked the beat and, I especialy liked the emotions that it evoked.
    | Posted on 2008-04-14 00:00:00 | by ImperfectGirl1 | [ Reply to This ]


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