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    dots Submission Name: Lil Souldots
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    Author: Squall Leon Hea
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 104/79/29
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    Description:
       To a dear friend and family

    Sis , cheer up


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    dotsLil Souldots
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    Do not blame yourself Lil Soul
    For no matter what , you are pure

    He might have played you for a fool
    But for that only you hold the cure

    Gentle soul , you shall not fall
    But go up high , when you hear the call

    Family , Hope , and Support you are to me
    I wish that you can see

    What good you have done to all
    And how important is your role

    To everyone you know
    To everysoul you saw

    So cheer up little soul
    And share your bless with all




    Submitted on 2008-04-09 02:34:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      what god you have done to all ?
    i think this needs fixin

    | Posted on 2008-04-09 00:00:00 | by acapone | [ Reply to This ]


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