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    dots Submission Name: The Innerworkings of A Madwomandots

    Author: SanctityExposed
    ASL Info:    25
    Elite Ratio:    3.98 - 48/66/40
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsThe Innerworkings of A Madwomandots

    Meticulous moments
    Wrapped in sarcasm,
    Drowned within reason
    Left without cause.

    Buried in silence
    Cast without glance,
    Marred by the world
    And beaten with angst.

    Sated by anger
    Controlled by the fear,
    Alone in a whirlwind
    To survive the day's end.

    Rainy day washboard
    Slow to the draw,
    Lured into doubt
    Set off in the dark.

    Projected by memory
    Guilted by flaw,
    Bittersweet casualty
    On the streets of my mind.

    Society defined
    But alone in a crowd,
    One breath to release
    And all again starts.

    Submitted on 2008-04-09 03:14:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is an amazingly accurate poem i watch my mother walk around in the same for week in and week out, some days better than others, and you worded the struggle of it all so beautifully.
    | Posted on 2008-04-09 00:00:00 | by Voodoo_Lounge | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like this lots of emotion
    I can relate to this atleast what i think the meaning is

    | Posted on 2008-04-09 00:00:00 | by acapone | [ Reply to This ]

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