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Kiss it all away

Author: Voodoo_Lounge
ASL Info:    21/F/OH
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Words: 100
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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rough, i know. But the first complete poem in years as unhappy with it as i am.

Kiss it all away

It aches to see his suffering
My heart swallows its sadness.
As far I thought we'd come and gone
I'm privy to this madness.

He's clouding all the color,
So hard to see it go;
When I know all would be well
If the wind would take him in it's flow.

As he sleeps I see the tightening jaw,
And worry weighted on the brow,
Wanting to kiss it all away-
I know that doesn't work somehow.

Loving so hard is killing me slow-
And these miniscule tragedies
Are infecting me now
Like overgrown agonies.

Submitted on 2008-04-09 11:53:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Loving so hard is killing me slow-
And these miniscule tragedies
Are infecting me now
Like overgrown agonies

Beautiful lines. I love seeing the old poignancy. The phrase miniscule tragedies.... beautiful. This does make me a bit sad to read. Knowing the feeling well, of losing yourself into something foreign and yet familiar, getting caught up into someone else, and the feeling of loss of self it can cause. Honestly, I liked the second half much more than the first. It felt more raw, and I connected more to it emotionally.
| Posted on 2008-04-10 00:00:00 | by brokenmuse | [ Reply to This ]

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