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    dots Submission Name: Hot Plastic Asians: Average Bisexual Experiencedots
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    Author: Ceyx
    Elite Ratio:    5.69 - 111/107/81
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
    Total Views: 1134
    Average Vote:    3.6667
    Bytes: 1277



    Description:
       
    I know, I feel sooo dirty leaving a description. It is so hard for me to type in this box because I feel like you should never have to explain your work... I think people should either; get it, care enough to look it up and then get it, or just not understand and move along because it's obviously not for them.

    But...

    This is the basic outline for the majority of my friend's bisexual experiences.
    It is just a little something I threw together w/ the help of Syn.
    It's funny to me how I would hear the same basic story from different friends, or friends of friends, over the years...

    -Just kind of wanted to get it out there.

    Anyone that has a comment to give or story to tell is more than welcome.
    And so you know- it's not just some big joke. Sure it was fun to make and parts of it have me giggling uncontrollable-like but this is serious to me...

    So, here we go:::


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      much props on the md 20/20....
    brought back the good old days of last year.

    this had me quietly laughing and at the same worriedly thinking *oh man this sounds a little like me!!!*

    haha...
    i've had that oh i was drunk excuse pulled on me before.
    lol.
    | Posted on 2008-06-06 00:00:00 | by was_i_ever_real | [ Reply to This ]
      Dude,

    I have to admit, this is hella fukkin funny! Cudos to you and Syn on the photoshop work, it really adds a nice touch (and it's far more artistic and engaging than a poem would have been . . . very clever you two!)

    I've wondered about this subject and how things have changed say in the past 20 years or so. Bisexuality was a lot rarer in those days of yore, whereas now it seems that everyone is taking a dive for the carpet (sorry, girlies, I'm not pointing slippery fingers here, it's just that it's more a girlie thing). It seems that word got out that it's hawt to munch-a-bunch, to kiss your sis . . . and all the girlies wanna compete, so why not? It's a theory I'm toying with, b/c it's either that, or . . . I dunno, an epidemic of g on g?

    Anyways, I'm rambling. This is a definate fave, (and yes, I trashed you on the one piece, but I take each piece on its own merits, and this one was freakishly hilarious, and well . . . executed!)



    Michael
    | Posted on 2008-05-06 00:00:00 | by Vancrown | [ Reply to This ]
      [censored] hilarious....i know that it was serious-ish, but at the same time, the pics adn commentary was awesomely funny
    and yeah, it really does work that way sometimes, which is sad....
    until it is made into a silent stop action cartoon, with eerily familiar anime dolls.

    kudos
    | Posted on 2008-04-15 00:00:00 | by blu_kittin | [ Reply to This ]
      Lol they look like Sailor Moon dolls or something. But don't all anime schoolgirls tend to look the same? I wouldn't know, but it's a hunch.

    This was fun. I like the randomness of household objects compared to your ladies

    Gawd...

    -shakes head-

    The last frame is sad.

    Anyway... thanks for sharing lolz.
    | Posted on 2008-04-14 00:00:00 | by sadtrapofgravit | [ Reply to This ]
      I enjoyed reading this. As Duv said, those dolls do look familiar. Anyways.. nice write. Very hilarious.
    Angel
    | Posted on 2008-04-10 00:00:00 | by bubble_popper15 | [ Reply to This ]
      OK, Ceyx, I'm gonna comment on this $hit right now, because I too often favorite things and then forget to comment on them...Ok, so this could either be taken seriously (as you said that it is) or it could be taken as fu<king hilarious. I saw it as both I guess. Considering that I laughed pretty much the whole time...Haha. But this could be taken seriously, for (though I have not had an experience like this) it seems very possible and likely that this would/has happened. Btw, those dolls look familar. Are they from an anime or something? Lets mes knows. But I would like to know why you wrote this. Honestly. I applaud you on your great effort and wish you peash and inspiration!

    Duv
    | Posted on 2008-04-09 00:00:00 | by Draumrkopa | [ Reply to This ]


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