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    dots Submission Name: Healing dots
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    Author: insanegemini
    ASL Info:    18/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.33 - 24/50/56
    Words: 141
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dots Healing dots
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    Tears scar
    Never-ending heartaches
    And a fatal kiss that will not leave

    Father time takes his toll
    These pains are to be
    An eternal haunting

    Taunting
    Wound opening
    Screams of JUST LEAVE
    Thoughts of please come back
    Jagged and nagging

    Ironically
    A single le day walks up after many
    And takes it all away

    Simply picks them up
    And carries them off
    Unknowledgeable of the bliss it has left

    Those scaring tears
    Dry and arent scaring at all
    Never-ending heartaches
    End
    And fatal kiss
    Is so benign
    It cowers in the glory
    In the growth and healing

    Somethings still linger
    But not mind bothering
    Yet as one head rises in acceptance
    Others fall
    In realization that failure is
    Patting them on the back





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