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    Author: Katlord
    ASL Info:    24/no thanks/my room
    Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 375/199/101
    Words: 375
    Class/Type: Rant/Serious
    Total Views: 1076
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    Bytes: 2023



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       Rant Rant Rant!! High school sucks. If you don't want to know what it's about then stop asking me. You want to know the thruth then listen. TO: A bunch of High school kids.


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    I don't care anymore. Stop with you accusations. Alright.... Fine.. "I'm a bad person" Is that what you people want to hear. Cause Hell I'll say it I'll scream it from the moutain tops. You yell at me for not helping.. Well where were you.. You're just as trained as I am.. You're right I could have helped.. That fact is I didn't and niether did you. You don't know what happened between us, all you know is that something did.. You have no ties to him you should have helped. Though the world would have been better off without him. You know that, I know that, Why am I the only one getting yelled at for it. You would have let him die too.. your excuse.. "Oh I was scared I couldn't think striaght so I didn't do anything.." My Excuse I wanted him dead."

    If that makes me a bad person then thats what I am. But the fact is. He lives, he's fine now back to his old ways. But me I'm not..

    I'm evil, demonic if you will. I'm not the same person I was just a day ago and it is because of you. Not him. He had little to do with it. He made me realize it. You.. You rubbed it in my face brought it out into the open and let everyone else see it.

    You are just as bad as I am. You have no reason for your hatred yet you havn't even tried to over come it. I have it didn't work.

    If I could only say this to your face. To all of you that torment me for the things that I cannot control.

    .. It's pointless trying to explain myself to you. You wouldn't understand it. You wouldn't listen you don't really care, no one really does there just in it for the show.

    GAWD I'm give up assume what you want I'm not even going to try to change what you think, cause you know what? What you think doesn't matter, Not in the slightest to me. Never did and it never will. So keep up your nonsense I through.




    Submitted on 2008-04-10 12:44:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This little rant is something I think many of us could agree with more or less. Having been on the receiving and giving end of something similar I have to imagine this felt pretty good to write. If you have second thoughts, don't. My experience is that humanity is inherently evil (fool ourselves though we might).
    | Posted on 2008-04-22 00:00:00 | by Immortalis | [ Reply to This ]


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