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    dots Submission Name: An Ode to Grandpadots
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    Author: atonement
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       My great-Grandfather died this morning


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    dotsAn Ode to Grandpadots
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    Although you are gone,
    I cannot feel great sorrow for you,
    you left this world,
    to go to the next.
    To be with your love,
    your grandsons,
    and all those passed before you.

    Although I'll miss you, and my heart will be heavy,
    I know that you are happy,
    free from age,
    free from earthly wants and needs.
    You can join her into eternal light.

    Although tears will be shed,
    and the family will hurt,
    they will remember you,
    through their stories,
    possesions
    and memories.
    They're going to laugh at all the little jokes you said.

    Although you're gone,
    I know elements of you are still here.
    I don't believe in heaven,
    but if there is such a thing,
    I know you would be there.




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      Trust me my Friend there is a Heaven and you can also Trust me on this Your Grandfather is there
    One can easilly tell and feel just how much of an impact he had on your Life and that is all God asks us to do here on Earth is to bring Love to others and share the Happiness he has brought you to others
    My Grandfathers (both of them) were truly Heroes to me as well and they are both also in Heaven enjoying eternal life
    I miss them everyn day of my life but like you I do know they are in a better Place
    I will be Praying for you and Your Grandfather
    Excellent Work
    I Loved it!!!

    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2008-06-14 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a very heartfelt and caring memorial to your Grandfather, Jordynn. I'm sure he is looking down on you and is pleased that you remembered him in such a warm and caring way!
    | Posted on 2008-05-11 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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