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    dots Submission Name: Rain Birdsdots
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    Author: lovedeathsdeath
    ASL Info:    20/M/NCUSA
    Elite Ratio:    5.28 - 39/43/33
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 167
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsRain Birdsdots
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    Dancing and singing,
    Frolic in the rain.
    The shoes on my feet dear
    Are giving me pain.

    They have filled with water
    as we shrilled away
    With our voices getting louder each day-
    and I didn't notice.

    I didn't hear the lovesong.
    The birds singing in the air.
    We kept dancing.
    We kept singing.
    And I didn't even care.

    I did not care about others
    And brought pain to their hearts.
    I'd stopped really loving
    Though we thought to start.




    Submitted on 2008-04-13 01:26:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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