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    dots Submission Name: God Save the Governmentdots
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    Author: Piper
    ASL Info:    18/ Female/ Europe
    Elite Ratio:    2.67 - 37/49/31
    Words: 129
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 185
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 850



    Description:
       My little rant about modern world and politics. :(


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    dotsGod Save the Governmentdots
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    We understand but can't accept
    Living in this fucking world
    Politics is all that matters now
    And I want to tell you to piss off.
    Can't help feeling this fucking way
    New products, new ads, just buy
    Everything's for sale
    Is this what the civilized world is supposed to be like?
    Sell your soul for a new handbag.
    You fuckers don't even care for us,
    As long as we provide you with cash.
    Vote, vote, vote,
    'I want to be your leader,
    I will guide you, save you, love you,
    Just vote for me.
    The lives of innocent people don't matter
    As long as I rule the world.'
    Piss off, fuck you, you're not making a difference,
    You never even tried,
    Well, listen, wait, consider yourself warned.




    Submitted on 2008-04-13 01:34:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Wow such powerfull words I can relate to in this. I really dont like the president we have now and this is how I felt about him,He talks a bunch of crap but never really proves his words and he ate a stupied chesseburger and was praised for it on the stupied news.
    But hon, let me not go on more from here cause you'd have a book to read instead of a comment.
    lol. Great work!Keep it up!

    totojane
    | Posted on 2009-08-20 00:00:00 | by totojane03 | [ Reply to This ]
      First, this should be under poetry, not lyrics. I like the unchained, bridal, brutal honesty. Alot of writers hold themselves back by not just letting their emotions and feelings fly. If you stop to think of some of the best, msot respected lyrics in history, they generally have one thing in common: they just let their sh*t fly. I give you credit on that.
    | Posted on 2008-04-14 00:00:00 | by hybridsongwrite | [ Reply to This ]
      yes this is a very true piece,A great rant,and all fact,consumerism is out of controll,and I feel that the buy,buy,vote mentality of sociaty is probobly going to distroy the world.
    the lifes of innocent people do matter,unfortunately not to pollititions.
    In the U.S. we have Bush,need I say more.
    keep on screaming
    | Posted on 2008-04-13 00:00:00 | by Diablo Tapitio | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow! Don't hold back tell us how you realy
    feel. I just wish I could be so eloquent when I rant abuout something. Nice write.

    The Poor Man's Poet.
    | Posted on 2008-04-13 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]
      keep those wheels turning...
    check out a song called "uncle sam goddamn"

    line1---change except to accept
    | Posted on 2008-04-13 00:00:00 | by bLiNdFAiTh | [ Reply to This ]



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