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    dots Submission Name: In Locrian Keydots

    Author: Syn
    Elite Ratio:    4.71 - 115/136/83
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Prose/Dark
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    dotsIn Locrian Keydots

    design a dark madrigal-

    strike a chord and call it dawn

    the blackest tone resounds

    bled onto the ivory keys

    {toxic to the treble clef;
    the lowest notes prevail}

    dripping towards dissonance

    scarlet on the musical page

    a red and black piano

    to play a red and black melody


    Submitted on 2008-04-13 02:35:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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