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    dots Submission Name: we came for your vampires...dots
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    Author: caster
    ASL Info:    31.M.MO
    Elite Ratio:    3.34 - 136/280/161
    Words: 236
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 693
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1556



    Description:
       about: love fallen short.

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    dotswe came for your vampires...dots
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    "we came for your vampires and stayed for the sunrise."

    iím sending you this one
    with honesty as my ink
    i hope the truth bleeds through
    and stains the hands
    i'll never hold again

    girl, you killed me
    i think this stands repeating
    girl, you killed me

    so just cut to the chase
    cut these wrists and run away
    it's just not in your veins
    trip these blood cells pixilate
    and trust you earned these words
    you loved me to death

    these days can't and won't
    hold all the nites we shared
    and i donít know the future
    but the past still kills amazing
    i feel like using hope for a hanging rope

    girl, you killed me
    i think this stands repeating
    girl, you killed me

    so just cut to the chase
    cut these wrists and run away
    it's just not in your veins
    trip these blood cells pixilate
    and trust you earned these words
    you loved me to death

    give me blood
    donít give me memories
    pull the razor
    push away all reasoning
    you cut me much deeper
    Than all the others
    You cut me so much deeper
    and this feeling was ours

    so just cut to the chase
    cut these wrists and run away
    it's just not in your veins
    trip these blood cells pixilate
    and trust you earned these words
    you loved me to death




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