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    dots Submission Name: Adriedots
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    Author: Vampiric Death
    Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 133/159/91
    Words: 116
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       my best friends birthday is tomorrow and it inspired me.

    Adrie, this is your's and no-one elses. That is why you get the title. You are my best friend ever, I love you, and happy birthday.

    this is for www.eliteskills.com/u/Twisted


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    dotsAdriedots
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    Once again I find myself
    sitting here with you
    on my mind and in my heart,
    wishing you were near.

    Once again I need a friend,
    one who I can trust
    with anything in the world,
    and that is you.

    Once again I dream of love,
    any kind as long as it's real
    and I remember I have that
    in you, my best friend.

    Once again I regret
    that I have caused you pain
    and never did I intend it,
    but that is how it was.

    Once again I can't believe
    that you are older than me,
    but it's true for a while,
    and I wish you a happy birthday.




    Submitted on 2008-04-13 23:51:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Oh, and I've never commented! I should kick myself in the ass for that!

    Still, I loved the flow of it, and the absolute emotion and truth reflected in the poem itself. It sets my heart on fire!
    | Posted on 2008-09-15 00:00:00 | by augustcranes | [ Reply to This ]


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