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    dots Submission Name: Iambic Pentameterdots
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    Author: Vampiric Death
    Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 133/159/91
    Words: 131
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       Written in iambic pentameter.


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    dotsIambic Pentameterdots
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    "And glad to hear those words I may yet be
    that life may find in you purpose to burn;
    yet I fear as darkness lives it may rule,
    and life shall flee from one whom I give love.
    Not the sense of which death so springs forth hence,
    but in such way I may care you do live."
    I care for you so much more than you know,
    and I pray you live even longer yet,
    no more should death cast his dark shadow near.
    This I pray in earnst with ferver immense,
    never will I give up on making you smile,
    nor will my worry for you soon cease.
    Stay with me as I will so stick with you
    for I care only that you are happy.





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