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    dots Submission Name: How Will I Knowdots
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    Author: Vampiric Death
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    dotsHow Will I Knowdots
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    Love runs deep
    across miles so vast
    and time means nothing
    while in loves grasp;
    but what happens to you
    is unknown to me,
    so if something happens,
    how will I know?




    Submitted on 2008-04-13 23:56:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      That is a question one asks. How will I know? Unfortunately, sometimes you may never know. But let us hope that you will.

    Pure emotion and truth. True poetry.
    | Posted on 2008-09-15 00:00:00 | by augustcranes | [ Reply to This ]


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