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    dots Submission Name: Paindots

    Author: Ramneet
    ASL Info:    33/F/Boston
    Elite Ratio:    3 - 265/107/53
    Words: 444
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dots Paindots

    Being gay and glum,
    two phases of life,
    like dawn and dusk.

    Without tasting the acrid taste of pain
    flavor of gaiety cannot be relished.

    Time the best healer.

    The excruciating pain of all agonies
    suffered in life
    subsides with time.

    Everyday dawns with a ray of hope
    and life keeps evolving.

    Poignancy makes the foundation of life strong.

    Being gay and glum,
    both states of mind,
    mind governs our attitude.

    Human beings always complexed in the intricacies of life.

    Human life is a journey.

    This world our sojourn.

    The real purpose of life is to explore the unexplored
    to have an enlightened mind,
    for the salvation of our soul
    to enter into the world with no pain
    and be our saviour.

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      What an excellent philosophical message is contained in this sage poem! Experiencing the inevitable pain encountered in life allows us to feel life's pleasure with with far greater wisdom and intensity!

    Nice work, lovely lady!
    | Posted on 2010-06-30 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      I enjoyed this piece - good meditation - that our ability to feel pain is also our ability to feel wonderful. Life is what we make of it and thought and attitude and how we learn and deal with things is how we evolve spiritually. Thanks for sharing!
    love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share
    tif ~*~
    | Posted on 2008-04-14 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]

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