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    dots Submission Name: I wish things would work out my way dots
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    Author: anguished_child
    ASL Info:    16/M/FL
    Elite Ratio:    4.03 - 69/51/57
    Words: 224
    Class/Type: Rant/Serious
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       stufff going on in my life probelms I'm dealing with


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    I wish things would work out my way so that I could date who I want and do what I want GOD..... I wish for all these thing to happen and I want for all these things to happen but I don't know I feel like a mouse caught on a wheel going around and around and around over and over again I just want it end
    I just want for me to be happy with my girl and my life but if my parents don't start leting me go will they ever I'm an tired of being held down with these chains and playing there game cant they see that i can control myself yeah i let my self get to crazy but if you would just give me another chance I can show you but no you won't your to pig headed to even think about aren't well let's say time go's slow but it always blows past to.
    I love her and i know she loves me and yes we are meant for eachother it doesn't matter how long it takes she will wait for me and then after I'm out you can't stop me from being the person i choose to be I love her and no one will ever change that
    I love you baby Always&Forever~




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      parents can be such arses sometimes!

    second chances are hard to come by if you've messed up....

    but in all honesty (and i'm only saying this because i spent 20 years of my life living as a prisoner in my parents house...no going out, no dating, blah blah blah you know the rest) they're only doing it out of love.

    it isn't right. i'm not siding with them.

    but....

    once you leave, they'll realize that they were wrong.
    try not to hold it against them.

    just hold onto love....and it will work out.
    maybe not in the time you want it to....but....
    it will work out.
    | Posted on 2008-04-15 00:00:00 | by was_i_ever_real | [ Reply to This ]


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