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Dear Mimi

Author: Squall Leon Hea
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For a dear friend and someone whom wa special to many


Dear Mimi

What is this I feel?
A feeling too real

Floating on a cloud
I was on bed with music loud

Now it's silent and calm
Open my eye and see my palm

Blocking my vision with something red
To my realization a tear I shed

The red was . . . Blood
Quantity and desity as mud

Where am I?
Blood covering my eye

I cannot see
What happened to me?

I don't hear a thing
I fell a string and on it I cling

" Sweetheart don't worry "
" everything will be fine" " sorry "

Two voices said to me
But them I can't see

Overwhelming comfort came upon
My soul , and warmth of the sun

I open my eyes one mre
And happiness fill my core

My parents that long have missed
Now I see and forgot my list

Of numbers of hugs and kisses for them
Since then the world never been dim

Best of luck , sweet dear Mimi
Best lovely dreams , little dreamy

Mimi , we love you dearly
So be happy and fly freely

Submitted on 2008-04-15 02:34:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  ah, kinda stream-of-consciousness-meets-timid-hip-hop at high noon under the moon... interseting, intriging, abstruse, and a tad arcane, but not bad at all.... bravo...
| Posted on 2008-04-15 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]

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