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    dots Submission Name: Sounds in a Still Shotdots
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    Author: Me Rambling
    Elite Ratio:    5.91 - 279/319/51
    Words: 145
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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    dotsSounds in a Still Shotdots
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    Too beautiful for words,
    Too lost for thought
    Not yet primed
    I sit back and wait
    Posed, prose at hand
    Words fall short,
    I turn my eyes back
    I see the image my mind creates
    In you, on you

    What would you do?

    Would we want to touch,
    Drag fingertips across skin
    Blow hair from your lips
    Nothing can block yours from mine

    Nothing,
    But reality

    Allow me to stay here a little longer
    Sin wrapped in skin
    Sex with pixels
    And what is this soundtrack?

    It's so distracting
    Because it's so real,
    These, sounds in a still shot

    But as I stare into your blind eye,
    The one not hidden by a smudge
    I see you searching for me
    But I don't know where to find you

    Maybe if I leave this dream,
    I can find you




    Submitted on 2008-04-15 17:01:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i like this a lot - the way you weave back and forth btw dream and picture is terrific.

    don't really have any suggestions. nice job

    peace, love and all that other junk,

    joe
    | Posted on 2008-06-13 00:00:00 | by joeyalphabet | [ Reply to This ]


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