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    dots Submission Name: The eye of the Stormdots
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    Author: blankscreen
    ASL Info:    17/f/PA
    Elite Ratio:    6.1 - 201/143/130
    Words: 235
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsThe eye of the Stormdots
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    Each breath;
    an icy cold blizzard
    Burns through my skin
    like a thunderbolt

    Each noise
    which escapes these fragile lips
    An inch of hope
    past this destruction

    We built fresh
    what we could never keep
    We mantain dreams
    we know we will never fulfill

    I try to pretend it wasn't my fault
    They are the ones who
    deemed me incomparable
    to this dreaded society

    I try to pretend they created this
    this person I can't stare in the mirror at
    Without seeing grey bittersweat sorrow
    hidden between teardrop cheeks
    And easily swayed eyes

    No one stops to watch me
    Or sees me on the stairs
    This invisibility was my creation
    When the realization hit me

    Like an apple atop my skull

    We all endure pain
    We all wake up each day
    To face the rising sun
    Of a new day not yet begun

    You ask a question
    Simple, meaningless, forgotten
    And we delve on to cry another night
    In this failure we call

    My life
    My ageless memories
    Which endure past time
    And selfcontrol

    We change and manage through our days
    But I still wonder if I am the only one
    Who remembers the smiles
    We used to keep hidden on

    The expressionless faces
    Gaunt and frozen
    Significant and burning
    A hole through our flesh

    Like a lightening bolt of hope.




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      A sort of soliliquay on the Self--life, love and the universe. A personal interrogatory... very neatly and and very deftly done thorughout... bravo... bravo... bravo... michael
    | Posted on 2008-08-11 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]



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