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    dots Submission Name: Taking a Walkdots

    Author: Ali Marie
    Elite Ratio:    2.84 - 105/106/76
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsTaking a Walkdots

    I set out going nowhere,
    Passing time and watching stars.
    Wandering with no place to go
    God, I'm wondering where you are.
    A stroll may take me far away
    My soul begins to grow its wings.
    My imagination begins to stray.
    I feel I can be anything.
    My steps are slow and light;
    My head is in the clouds.
    I can embrace this beautiful sight,
    I never heard my voice this loud.

    Submitted on 2008-04-15 20:23:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      "I set out going nowhere,
    Passing time and watching stars.
    Wandering with no place to go
    God, I'm wondering where you are"

    i've felt this way so many times, but i think you expressed it better than i ever could have. made me feel kinda lost and sad in a way but this line gave hope...
    "I feel I can be anything"

    short and to the point but a good write indeed, reflection...intropection...that's what i see...in search of one's identity or which road to choose or just in search of answers...nevertheless, a quest...
    | Posted on 2008-04-15 00:00:00 | by scissorhands | [ Reply to This ]

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