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    dots Submission Name: Unintendeddots
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    Author: Ali Marie
    Elite Ratio:    2.84 - 103/106/76
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Oh how summer keeps you looking young
    No longer my lover still somebody's son

    I was always beautiful at looking good
    Your secrets could destroy and I knew they would

    Innocent love at its best, something pure
    For lovers like these, there is never a cure

    Sidestepping reality, with narrow a chance
    To transform this into a brilliant dance

    Guitar strings and vocal chords leave you locked in place
    It's me on your radio, the fact you can't face

    Stranger, you sit with tear stains and tissues
    holding your broken heart and a love you outgrew.




    Submitted on 2008-04-15 20:33:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love the word play in this and how everything flows, I dont really have anything to say on this poem I love it as is very very good piece
    | Posted on 2008-04-17 00:00:00 | by Mirado | [ Reply to This ]



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